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That was a nice reading indeed :D

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 12:37 pm 
Fight

Samsun gawped at your strength. The gladiators
in the amphitheatre took a minute to catch their breath.
The Incredible Hulk shrunk to one-tenth
of his usual size. The devil returned to his faith.
King Kong hid behind a rose bush, and Godzilla
looked like a lizard crawling beneath a stone
when you marched into that hospital ward,
ready to kick the Reaper from his throne.
Fireworks fizzed in your eyes like lemonade bubbles,
spitting and popping. Disease had a long fight ahead.
The doctors marvelled at the effort and trouble
you had gone to win your fight from bed

and the flickering machine refusing to flatline,
supported by love in a green light instead.


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Forgot to mention on, Friday, Stevie that I enjoyed that poem. :)

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Argument

The beginning ends as the end begins,
There is no hope in turning back towards
The starting line, to hear the gun again.
Now we've already sprinted to the wars.

You are both my enemy and lover,
Yet I can't tell the difference between them
On this battlefield where we find ourselves;
Shooting angry bullets from our tongue.

I'll lay my rifle down beside me now,
If you'll only promise to do the same.
We'll put all of this behind us if you'd
Only admit you were wrong once again.

Blood drips from the heart as love escapes it's
Helpless grip, and struggles even to breathe.
I never thought I'd need a sword, or even
Words to make you fall in love with me.

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Wow Tom, I love it!! Well done!!

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 7:40 pm 
Thanks for your comment Tom, and nice contribution yourself mate - gritty!! (but in your usual dreamy, romantic way :lol: )


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Stephen wrote:
Thanks for your comment Tom, and nice contribution yourself mate - gritty!! (but in your usual dreamy, romantic way :lol: )


Thanks. I was going to call it "Fight" until I realised you'd used that title for your last poem. :lol:

And thanks to you too, Sergio. :smt023

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Stephen wrote:
Thanks for your comment Tom, and nice contribution yourself mate - gritty!! (but in your usual dreamy, romantic way :lol: )


Thanks. I was going to call it "Fight" until I realised you'd used that title for your last poem. :lol:




:lol:


To be honest Tom, I have a notebook & the title of it is actually "Aunt Margaret", for the purpose of this forum, that's the quickie title I threw it, ha!


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I'm sure I'd be able to think of a title more meaningful than "Argument" when it comes to ammending that poem for the book I'm supposed to be doing. :roll: :lol:

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 8:15 pm 
Seriously shagger, what is the deal with that?? You're taknig FOREVER!! :lol:


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Stephen wrote:
Seriously shagger, what is the deal with that?? You're taknig FOREVER!! :lol:


And where's yours then? :p

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 8:20 pm 
I told you I shelved mine because I was too busy trying to move home (this also seems to have fallen through) and getting my jiggy on!

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I told you I shelved mine because I was too busy trying to move home (this also seems to have fallen through) and getting my jiggy on!

:p :lol:


Those are better reasons for than mine. I just forget about it, or can't be bothered to sort it out. :lol:

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Those are better reasons for than mine. I just forget about it, or can't be bothered to sort it out. :lol:



Ah lad, you really should. What a buzz you'll get once it's ready for distribution.

My mate Dave still speaks to me about "Limelight" and "Dirty Numb Angel Boy", and its such a thrill when people have their own interpretations, or get a buzz from your work. You know that. It's worth it, but you have to be sure it's definitely the best you have to offer, and I guess if you aren't fully focussed on it, then perhaps it is best to take a back seat until you are fully engaged in the project.


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I just know I can do better than what I've got at the moment. :)

Anyway, I've not really done anything about it for a few months now, so I may start to work on it again actually. I'm feeling a little more inspired lately.

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